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Falling In Love

Falling in love Caught in a web that a spider is spinning Counting his legs as I notice him grinning Perhaps a dream that is just now beginning I must be falling in love Singing a song while the music is playing Don’t know the words, I make up what I’m saying I can’t stop dancing, my body is swaying I must be falling in love Running a race down a path that is bending Seeking to finish, I know it is pending Sweating so much it could be never ending I must be falling in love Chasing the moon that is constantly shining Waving my hands as if stars I’m designing Even with Elm trees I’m forever pining I must be falling in love Picking up petals another is dropping Sweeter than vanilla butter cream topping Delicious moments there’s no sense in stopping I must be falling in love Hitting a drum in a cadence that’s pounding Played in a very nice rhythm, astounding Just like a heartbeat in spring it is sounding I must be falling in love Writing a poem with words that I’m feeling Every desire your beauty revealing Asking your hand as I’m carefully kneeling I must be falling in love Now as I stare in your perfect eyes glowing Feeling affection they’re constantly showing Finding each day of my life I am knowing With you I've fallen in love

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/28/2017 12:41:00 AM

Hi Chris!:))Very beautifully written romantic, sweet and passionate love poem Chris:)All so beautiful!Just awesome!I truly love it all! A 7 + + ! A fav too. For sure I'll continue reading more of your very beautiful poetry and (hearing) music, my friend Chris:))Spill ink!Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you always!:)) D

Chris Green
Date: 6/28/2017 8:54:00 AM

Thanks again my friend. I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave such a nice comment on this poem.

Carole Duet

Date: 1/16/2017 8:03:00 PM

I love it! So romantic and uplifting. And I really like the repitition. Carole

Chris Green
Date: 1/17/2017 8:14:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/16/2017 2:14:00 PM

now, this wants me to get out there and have a dose of sweet lovin', chris... splendid!..huggs

Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 2:50:00 PM

Thanks so very much Nette, coming from the romance queen, your kind words mean a lot to me.

Frederic Parker

Date: 1/16/2017 1:20:00 PM

Well done, excellent cadence, the word that comes to mind is smooth

Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 2:50:00 PM

Thank Frederick for your kind thoughts.

Gary Smith

Date: 1/16/2017 12:35:00 PM

That flows along wonderfully Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 2:49:00 PM

Thanks so very much Gary

Judy Ball

Date: 1/16/2017 12:33:00 PM

Oh Chris this is wonderful. From one to seven this gets a great big 10 from me. Excellent cadence, wonderful rhythm and rhyme, perfect in every way. Absolutely love it. God Bless, JB

Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 2:49:00 PM

Thanks so very much Judy for your kind and encouraging comments today. I appreciate your visit

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/16/2017 12:25:00 PM

I must be falling in love with your poem! Great job, Chris!

Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 2:49:00 PM

Thank you so much Kim, I am happy you feel for this one. :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/16/2017 11:48:00 AM

The moon must be melting with this beautiful romantic poem. You are so good. ..and if not in love , definitely in a fervent affection .A fave.

Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 11:55:00 AM

"fervent affection" I like that. : ) Thanks you so very much my sweet friend for your wonderful comments and this smile I am wearing.

John Hamilton

Date: 1/16/2017 11:21:00 AM

Loved the rhymes very complex construction, don't think there is a name for this form, but I really like this one! Love the refrain, repeated over and over, indeed feels like a song.

Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 11:37:00 AM

Thanks so very much John. Yeah, I don't know if it is a recognized form or not, it just kind of came out this way.

Darren White

Date: 1/16/2017 10:48:00 AM

Please sing and play the song for us :).... Even with Elm trees I'm forever pining... wonderful. I love the rhyme you used.

Darren White
Date: 1/16/2017 12:53:00 PM

Don't say that ;) I might like it!

Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 11:36:00 AM

Thanks so very much Darren. I'm not sure you'd want to hear me sing. :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/16/2017 10:46:00 AM

Hi Chris, I really enjoyed this write. It was sooo romantic. I found it to have a nice flow with amazing rhymes. The repeated use of the line "I must be falling in love" made this piece more special. Yep I'm a goner " I've fallin for your pen" . A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 11:36:00 AM

Thank you so very much my sweet friend. I always appreciate your kind words to me. I am so happy you feel for this one. :)