Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Falling In Love

Falling in love

Caught in a web that a spider is spinning
Counting his legs as I notice him grinning
Perhaps a dream that is just now beginning
I must be falling in love

Singing a song while the music is playing
Don’t know the words, I make up what I’m saying
I can’t stop dancing, my body is swaying
I must be falling in love

Running a race down a path that is bending
Seeking to finish, I know it is pending
Sweating so much it could be never ending
I must be falling in love

Chasing the moon that is constantly shining
Waving my hands as if stars I’m designing
Even with Elm trees I’m forever pining
I must be falling in love

Picking up petals another is dropping
Sweeter than vanilla butter cream topping
Delicious moments there’s no sense in stopping
I must be falling in love

Hitting a drum in a cadence that’s pounding
Played in a very nice rhythm, astounding
Just like a heartbeat in spring it is sounding
I must be falling in love

Writing a poem with words that I’m feeling
Every desire your beauty revealing
Asking your hand as I’m carefully kneeling
I must be falling in love

Now as I stare in your perfect eyes glowing
Feeling affection they’re constantly showing
Finding each day of my life I am knowing
With you I've fallen in love

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Dorian Petersen Potter June 28, 2017 at 12:41 AM Hi Chris!:))Very beautifully written romantic, sweet and passionate love poem Chris:)All so beautiful!Just awesome!I truly love it all! A 7 + + ! A fav too. For sure I'll continue reading more of your very beautiful poetry and (hearing) music, my friend Chris:))Spill ink!Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you always!:)) D Chris Green June 28, 2017 at 8:54 AM Thanks again my friend. I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave such a nice comment on this poem.

Carole Duet January 16, 2017 at 8:03 PM I love it! So romantic and uplifting. And I really like the repitition. Carole Chris Green January 17, 2017 at 8:14 AM Thank you so very much my friend.

Nette Onclaud January 16, 2017 at 2:14 PM now, this wants me to get out there and have a dose of sweet lovin', chris... splendid!..huggs Chris Green January 16, 2017 at 2:50 PM Thanks so very much Nette, coming from the romance queen, your kind words mean a lot to me.

Frederic Parker January 16, 2017 at 1:20 PM Well done, excellent cadence, the word that comes to mind is smooth Chris Green January 16, 2017 at 2:50 PM Thank Frederick for your kind thoughts.

Gary Smith January 16, 2017 at 12:35 PM That flows along wonderfully Chris :) Chris Green January 16, 2017 at 2:49 PM Thanks so very much Gary

Judy Ball January 16, 2017 at 12:33 PM Oh Chris this is wonderful. From one to seven this gets a great big 10 from me. Excellent cadence, wonderful rhythm and rhyme, perfect in every way. Absolutely love it. God Bless, JB Chris Green January 16, 2017 at 2:49 PM Thanks so very much Judy for your kind and encouraging comments today. I appreciate your visit

Kim Rodrigues January 16, 2017 at 12:25 PM I must be falling in love with your poem! Great job, Chris! Chris Green January 16, 2017 at 2:49 PM Thank you so much Kim, I am happy you feel for this one. :)

Charmaine Chircop January 16, 2017 at 11:48 AM The moon must be melting with this beautiful romantic poem. You are so good. ..and if not in love , definitely in a fervent affection .A fave. Chris Green January 16, 2017 at 11:55 AM "fervent affection" I like that. : ) Thanks you so very much my sweet friend for your wonderful comments and this smile I am wearing.

John Hamilton January 16, 2017 at 11:21 AM Loved the rhymes very complex construction, don't think there is a name for this form, but I really like this one! Love the refrain, repeated over and over, indeed feels like a song. Chris Green January 16, 2017 at 11:37 AM Thanks so very much John. Yeah, I don't know if it is a recognized form or not, it just kind of came out this way.

Darren White January 16, 2017 at 10:48 AM Please sing and play the song for us :).... Even with Elm trees I'm forever pining... wonderful. I love the rhyme you used. Darren White January 16, 2017 at 12:53 PM Don't say that ;) I might like it! Chris Green January 16, 2017 at 11:36 AM Thanks so very much Darren. I'm not sure you'd want to hear me sing. :)

Alexis Y. January 16, 2017 at 10:46 AM Hi Chris, I really enjoyed this write. It was sooo romantic. I found it to have a nice flow with amazing rhymes. The repeated use of the line "I must be falling in love" made this piece more special. Yep I'm a goner " I've fallin for your pen" . A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis Chris Green January 16, 2017 at 11:36 AM Thank you so very much my sweet friend. I always appreciate your kind words to me. I am so happy you feel for this one. :)