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Falling In Love

Birthed in the Spring sun,
The leaves are virgins to Fall:
Fondled by the breeze.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/11/2009 3:53:00 PM

I love your inventiveness. Sara

James Peranteau

Date: 7/11/2009 1:20:00 PM

Raul,..this is truly a great Haiku !! TY for sharing this awesome poetry !!!! james

Brian Strand

Date: 7/11/2009 1:01:00 AM

This says so much Raul.Love L3.One for my favourites.Rgds Brian 7 thanks for your welcome comments today.

Edward Orozco

Date: 7/10/2009 12:49:00 PM

Good write master! - eduardo

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 7/10/2009 12:26:00 AM

Amazing Raul. Another beautiful write!

James Fraser

Date: 7/8/2009 3:30:00 PM

Another gem from the Raul pen>>James

John Weber

Date: 7/8/2009 12:09:00 PM

Somehow titillating, while also carrying that sense of innocence. A wonderful write, Raul! Warm regards, John.

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/8/2009 6:59:00 AM

This is an excellent poem my friend. I see the breeze is getting the best of nature. I like the essence of this haiku and the flow of the words. The theme is right on point. Great job! ~Joseph