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Falling In Love

Birthed in the Spring sun, The leaves are virgins to Fall: Fondled by the breeze.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/11/2009 3:53:00 PM

I love your inventiveness. Sara

James Peranteau

Date: 7/11/2009 1:20:00 PM

Raul,..this is truly a great Haiku !! TY for sharing this awesome poetry !!!! james

Brian Strand

Date: 7/11/2009 1:01:00 AM

This says so much Raul.Love L3.One for my favourites.Rgds Brian 7 thanks for your welcome comments today.

Edward Orozco

Date: 7/10/2009 12:49:00 PM

Good write master! - eduardo

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 7/10/2009 12:26:00 AM

Amazing Raul. Another beautiful write!

James Fraser

Date: 7/8/2009 3:30:00 PM

Another gem from the Raul pen>>James

John Weber

Date: 7/8/2009 12:09:00 PM

Somehow titillating, while also carrying that sense of innocence. A wonderful write, Raul! Warm regards, John.

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/8/2009 6:59:00 AM

This is an excellent poem my friend. I see the breeze is getting the best of nature. I like the essence of this haiku and the flow of the words. The theme is right on point. Great job! ~Joseph

Karla Null

Date: 7/7/2009 11:07:00 AM

How beautiful you say it...Karla

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/7/2009 10:48:00 AM

There's nothing more beautiful than to love and feel loved and there isnt a breeze sweeter than Fall ing in love---romantic and sweet--charma

Abe Lopez

Date: 7/7/2009 10:30:00 AM

Another great Haiku from a great poet. your writes are a true inspiration!.........alopez

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/7/2009 6:53:00 AM

The newness of the spring leaf....virginal, fresh, untouched...what a lovely concept! Nicely done!! ~ Carrie

Brian Strand

Date: 7/7/2009 6:08:00 AM

Tender words from a talented pen Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for yourb welcome comments

Colin Mitchell Williams

Date: 7/7/2009 4:44:00 AM

Provocative Nature... lovely Haiku Raul .... thank you so much for all your recent comments

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/7/2009 4:23:00 AM

delightful! Raul, jim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/7/2009 3:35:00 AM

Excellent Haiku Raul. Beautiful. Love, Carol

Leon Wilson

Date: 7/7/2009 2:11:00 AM

Wow Raul I'll never look at another leaf in the same way now. God Bless. Leon