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Falling in Love

Birthed in the Spring sun,
The leaves are virgins to Fall:
Fondled by the breeze.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/11/2009 3:53:00 PM
I love your inventiveness. Sara
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Date: 7/11/2009 1:20:00 PM
Raul,..this is truly a great Haiku !! TY for sharing this awesome poetry !!!! james
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Date: 7/11/2009 1:01:00 AM
This says so much Raul.Love L3.One for my favourites.Rgds Brian 7 thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 7/10/2009 12:49:00 PM
Good write master! - eduardo
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Date: 7/10/2009 12:26:00 AM
Amazing Raul. Another beautiful write!
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Date: 7/8/2009 3:30:00 PM
Another gem from the Raul pen>>James
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Date: 7/8/2009 12:09:00 PM
Somehow titillating, while also carrying that sense of innocence. A wonderful write, Raul! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 7/8/2009 6:59:00 AM
This is an excellent poem my friend. I see the breeze is getting the best of nature. I like the essence of this haiku and the flow of the words. The theme is right on point. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 7/7/2009 11:07:00 AM
How beautiful you say it...Karla
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Date: 7/7/2009 10:48:00 AM
There's nothing more beautiful than to love and feel loved and there isnt a breeze sweeter than Fall ing in love---romantic and sweet--charma
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Date: 7/7/2009 10:30:00 AM
Another great Haiku from a great poet. your writes are a true inspiration!.........alopez
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Date: 7/7/2009 6:53:00 AM
The newness of the spring leaf....virginal, fresh, untouched...what a lovely concept! Nicely done!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 7/7/2009 6:08:00 AM
Tender words from a talented pen Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for yourb welcome comments
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Date: 7/7/2009 4:44:00 AM
Provocative Nature... lovely Haiku Raul .... thank you so much for all your recent comments
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Date: 7/7/2009 4:23:00 AM
delightful! Raul, jim
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Date: 7/7/2009 3:35:00 AM
Excellent Haiku Raul. Beautiful. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/7/2009 2:11:00 AM
Wow Raul I'll never look at another leaf in the same way now. God Bless. Leon
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