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His heart beat hard, his heart beat strong, His heart was tougher than rock, And he buried his wants in his unbreakable heart, Then his heart was forcefully locked, You see, he’d hardened his heart to fight the battle, To attack without any regret, To attack and repel each of his needs, By pretending his life was perfect, But that was until, from out of nowhere, The smallest little woman walked in, And, with her tiniest heart, and her cute little smile, She planted a seed deep within, And this seed grew up hard, this seed grew up strong, It took him back to the start, And replaced the hard of his unbreakable world, With a rose filled with love in his heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/12/2018 7:49:00 AM
Nice one Lewis...
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 3/12/2018 5:46:00 PM
Thanks SO
Date: 3/12/2018 7:39:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this piece a lot!
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Date: 3/12/2018 5:46:00 PM
Hi, thanks Kudzai :)
Date: 3/12/2018 7:36:00 AM
Ends up nicely!
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Date: 3/12/2018 5:46:00 PM
yep, thanks Kim
Date: 3/11/2018 9:29:00 PM
Wonderful Lewis!! Warmed my heart..
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Date: 3/12/2018 5:46:00 PM
Thanks Roberta, glad u liked this one
Date: 3/11/2018 9:14:00 PM
Beautiful and heartwarming. A great write, Lewis.
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Date: 3/12/2018 5:45:00 PM
thank u Line :)

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