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Falling In Love

His heart beat hard, his heart beat strong, 
His heart was tougher than rock,
And he buried his wants in his unbreakable heart, 
Then his heart was forcefully locked,

You see, he’d hardened his heart to fight the battle, 
To attack without any regret,
To attack and repel each of his needs, 
By pretending his life was perfect,

But that was until, from out of nowhere, 
The smallest little woman walked in,
And, with her tiniest heart, and her cute little smile, 
She planted a seed deep within,

And this seed grew up hard, this seed grew up strong, 
It took him back to the start,
And replaced the hard of his unbreakable world, 
With a rose filled with love in his heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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March 12, 2018 at 7:49 AM
Nice one Lewis...
Raynes Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 5:46 PM
Thanks SO
Mhangwa Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 7:39 AM
I enjoyed reading this piece a lot!
Raynes Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 5:46 PM
Hi, thanks Kudzai :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 7:36 AM
Ends up nicely!
Raynes Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 5:46 PM
yep, thanks Kim
B. Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 9:29 PM
Wonderful Lewis!! Warmed my heart..
Raynes Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 5:46 PM
Thanks Roberta, glad u liked this one
Gauthier Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 9:14 PM
Beautiful and heartwarming. A great write, Lewis.
Raynes Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 5:45 PM
thank u Line :)
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