Falling Grain

field full of stubble
amongst upthrust golden spikes
flock of geese feeding
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Chamberlain Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 12:15 PM
A really lovely Haiku. Thank you for sharing.
Achara Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 1:15 PM
Thank you and you are welcome.
Green Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 9:37 AM
Really nicely done.
Achara Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 10:51 AM
Thank you
Allison Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 1:31 PM
I can see it so clearly in my minds eye, a scene I have seen so frequently in the last few weeks:-) hugs Jan xx
Achara Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 2:43 PM
Thank you!
Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 12:56 PM
That would be a sight to see. It is that time of year for the harvest. Enjoyed reading your work. Sara
Achara Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 2:42 PM
Thank you. In our area of southwest Washington we have hundreds of geese in various fields this time of year, including the white ones.
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