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Falling Grain

field full of stubble amongst upthrust golden spikes flock of geese feeding

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Date: 10/1/2021 12:15:00 PM

A really lovely Haiku. Thank you for sharing.

Chetta Achara
Date: 10/1/2021 1:15:00 PM

Thank you and you are welcome.

Date: 10/1/2021 9:37:00 AM

Really nicely done.

Chetta Achara
Date: 10/1/2021 10:51:00 AM

Thank you

Date: 9/30/2021 1:31:00 PM

I can see it so clearly in my minds eye, a scene I have seen so frequently in the last few weeks:-) hugs Jan xx

Chetta Achara
Date: 9/30/2021 2:43:00 PM

Thank you!

Date: 9/30/2021 12:56:00 PM

That would be a sight to see. It is that time of year for the harvest. Enjoyed reading your work. Sara

Chetta Achara
Date: 9/30/2021 2:42:00 PM

Thank you. In our area of southwest Washington we have hundreds of geese in various fields this time of year, including the white ones.