Falling From the Clouds

When the sky before dawn began to burn 
into one flower of a night beyond pearl 
petals blossom satin white dressed
 
Where twilight turns within dreams locked precious 
gently placing a whisper blowing softly peace 
upon the breathless breeze returning echoes haunt 

Whistling clear cut diamond etched it was there born 
that the moon smiled delighted as a vision of your love 
Entered through salt wrapped sweetly in the cradle held

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 4/9/2024 11:44:00 AM
Beautiful poem! I pray all is well with you my dearest friend, Liam. God bless you always! D.
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Date: 9/14/2023 1:27:00 AM
“Flower of a night beyond pearl” that line stood out for me. Such gorgeous and flawless imagery, absolutely stunning and very descriptive. I enjoyed reading this
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/14/2023 12:38:00 PM
Thank you kindly for your deeply heartfelt comment greatly appreciated bless you
Date: 9/13/2023 2:39:00 PM
This is such a visually beautiful and well written poem Liam. Love the opening line. Another great line,’upon the breathless breeze returning echoes haunt’. Just lovely! Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/14/2023 12:37:00 PM
Thank you deeply for your wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated
Date: 9/13/2023 1:27:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Liam
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/14/2023 12:36:00 PM
Bless you Tom for the lovely comment
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