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When the sky before dawn began to burn into one flower of a night beyond pearl petals blossom satin white dressed Where twilight turns within dreams locked precious gently placing a whisper blowing softly peace upon the breathless breeze returning echoes haunt Whistling clear cut diamond etched it was there born that the moon smiled delighted as a vision of your love Entered through salt wrapped sweetly in the cradle held

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/6/2018 1:56:00 PM
Your poetry holds me spellbound, every word brings on visions of great beauty thank you for sharing Liam
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Date: 11/5/2018 6:38:00 AM
A tender and beautiful poem..your words float gently to reach the reader. Well done, Liam.
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Date: 11/4/2018 11:53:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Liam :) - Best wishes for a lovely new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/4/2018 5:57:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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