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Falling From the Clouds

When the sky before dawn began to burn 
into one flower of a night beyond pearl 
petals blossom satin white dressed

Where twilight turns within dreams locked precious 
gently placing a whisper blowing softly peace 
upon the breathless breeze returning echoes haunt

Whistling clear cut diamond etched it was there born 
that the moon smiled delighted as a vision of your love 
Entered through salt wrapped sweetly in the cradle held
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rose  Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 1:56 PM
Your poetry holds me spellbound, every word brings on visions of great beauty thank you for sharing Liam
Pandit Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 6:38 AM
A tender and beautiful poem..your words float gently to reach the reader. Well done, Liam.
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 11:53 PM
- A beautiful poem, Liam :) - Best wishes for a lovely new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 5:57 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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