Falling For You

Falling for You
I made a wish to God one night
I prayed with all my may, I wished with all my might
That my first falling star to be seen with whomever
Would be the “one” I was to be with forever
That night came with you and I couldn’t believe  
Surely God was mistaken on what we agreed
For that night whom I was with was my best friend
Could this really someday be my husband?
Never again did I see falling stars around anyone but you
Surely by the third one I knew, god was trying to give me a clue
I started this relationship to see if it was worthwhile
And can’t believe here today we’re walking down the aisle 
All we have now starting from a wish and a prayer
All our love we have for each other cannot compare
Forever and always we’ll be together, I love you with all of my heart
I’ll prove that to you today as we say… till death do us part.
Thank you god for hearing my prayers and coming through
I’ll vow my love to him forever and say I Do.

By Jamie Ayala
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 5:04 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 14, 2016 at 12:16 PM
jamie ayala, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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July 27, 2015 at 2:27 PM
Jamie, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
Brown Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 7:28 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jamie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 3:01 PM
Nice expressions on the feelings of love, Jamie
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June 6, 2011 at 12:13 AM
welcome here in the poetry soup...good luck//... ***** jun-jun
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June 5, 2011 at 9:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your amazing creative poetry tonight.. enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv..
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June 5, 2011 at 6:24 PM
Hello Jamie, wow! who would have known he was by your side all the time.. I see how you missed god's sign at first.. it happens to us when we are lost and in need.. I'm so happy for you... take care,..p.d.
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