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Falling For You


cascading currents

slip and surge o’er slopes and swells ~

rapturous rapids


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11/9/2019

Metaphor of Love Contest

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Pat Adams

November 19, 2019 at 8:33 AM

I'm behind on my reading. Glad I didn't miss this one. Well done. Congrats! .... Pat

Hello There

November 19, 2019 at 4:51 PM

Me, too, my friend ;) Thank you so much, Pat! :)

Kai Michael Neumann

November 15, 2019 at 4:43 AM

Beautiful. Kind wishes, Kai

Hello There

November 15, 2019 at 9:47 AM

THank you so much, Kai ~ kind wishes to you as well :)

Line Gauthier

November 13, 2019 at 6:43 AM

Hello There, lovely poem. Congrats on your win.

Hello There

November 13, 2019 at 11:29 AM

Thank you very much, Line ~ I really appreciate it :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 13, 2019 at 5:01 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, H.T. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hello There

November 13, 2019 at 11:28 AM

Thank you so much, Anne-Lise :) hugs

Sandra Adams

November 12, 2019 at 7:27 PM

congratulations my friend :) hugs

Hello There

November 13, 2019 at 11:27 AM

Thank you, Sandra :) hugs, my friend

Brenda Chiri

November 12, 2019 at 7:13 PM

HP congratulations on your win!;)

Hello There

November 13, 2019 at 11:26 AM

Thank you, Brenda ~ I appreciate it :)

Bobby May

November 12, 2019 at 7:02 PM

Congratulation on your Placement! I loved the images placed in my mind!! Well done

Hello There

November 13, 2019 at 11:26 AM

Thank you so much, Bobby! Another fun contest of yours, though it had my mind going too many places ;)

Chris Green

November 11, 2019 at 7:45 AM

Beautifully written my friend. Such a soft and soothing piece. Best wishes in the contest.

Hello There

November 12, 2019 at 3:10 PM

Thank you very much, Chris! I appreciate your kind words :)

Silent One

November 11, 2019 at 3:57 AM

Great imagery in your ku and I love that pic..

Hello There

November 12, 2019 at 3:09 PM

Thank you, Silent One ~ so glad you enjoyed this piece and pic!!

Regina Mcintosh

November 11, 2019 at 3:56 AM

Love this. It's a awesome write. God bless you sweet friend, Gina

Hello There

November 12, 2019 at 3:08 PM

Thank you so much, Regina!!

Gershon Wolf

November 10, 2019 at 1:49 PM

Imagery from somewhere beyond Nirvana! Very, very, very nice, H.T! :) gw

Hello There

November 11, 2019 at 12:11 AM

Thank you very, very, very much, gw! :)

Arturo Michael

November 10, 2019 at 1:57 AM

Nice flowing imagery here...

Hello There

November 10, 2019 at 10:55 AM

Thank you, Arturo :)

Vijay Pandit

November 9, 2019 at 8:30 AM

Succinctly done in charming imagery--the photo and metaphor speak for love, HT.

Hello There

November 9, 2019 at 11:42 AM

Thank you, Vijay ~ I appreciate your feedback, always :)

Ts Poetry

November 9, 2019 at 8:10 AM

Excellent ku

Hello There

November 9, 2019 at 11:41 AM

Thank you very much, TS Poetry ~ I appreciate it :)

Sandra Adams

November 9, 2019 at 6:49 AM

nicely expressed my friend...the picture does go nicely with your words.... hugs :)

Hello There

November 9, 2019 at 11:41 AM

Thank you so much, Sandra :) hugs

Richard Lamoureux

November 9, 2019 at 12:57 AM

I really like it. The picture is also a nice touch. Hugs Rick.

Hello There

November 9, 2019 at 1:06 AM

Thank you, Rick :) hugs

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