Falling Away

It's all falling away
The wind comes 
Blows away my ashen heart
It aches
Constant pain
Another day
Another painful thought
Wishing to just hold your hand
My heart is replaced with ice
My soul remains the same
I feel a cold dying pain in my chest
I see you walk by
I get the urge to grab your hand and say
"I love you..."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Orschell Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 6:27 PM
It's hard to ignore that urge isn't it? Great write. -Destiny
Mehta Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 6:23 PM
A wonderful write. I like it
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