Falling Apart

You say everything will be okay,
But is that true?
Can i trust you?
Because life gets harder everyday,
Life is always so blue...

When I go to sleep,
I wish to never wake- up,
Because I get so deep,
and have trouble getting back up...

All i want is someone to lean on,
Someone to trust,
I just want to be done,
of being judged.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Pettit Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 8:30 PM
A very touching entry here. Just make one correction in your fourth line: Remove the apostrophe in "get's". No genitive or possessive case exists there. Everything else appears well.
Kendrick Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 4:37 PM
Different. Sara
Keen Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 12:27 PM
i feel the same way really! great write
Burton Avatar
August 5, 2009 at 5:33 PM
Titles great and fitting for the poem... love a truthful write that explains the emotions of a human being. Enjoy your day.
Joseph Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 9:02 AM
ah, maturity will bring your cloak so no one can judge you....
Brown Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 10:15 PM
Many people can relate to this one. This one drips with pain. Love it. Keep writing.
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