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Falling All Apart

Bits of every consciousness does live on Transported through cosmic thought energy When the whole of self is nearly now gone Deep down inside where nobody shall see Some could call spirits back upon command When one wants to hold on to endeavor Just for those inspired instants once so grand This way, we should surely live forever Karmic kindness in glowing auras shines Glimpses of all can come alive again Like little film clips chiming in our minds Melded interminably well within If there is one soul still here on this earth Many can live on, for what it is worth

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/23/2021 3:48:00 AM

This is so true Greg. I understand auras. After I quit flying I became an Aura Photographer. It is amazing what shows up in the photographs. I love the meaning in your third stanza. I am Faving this gem. Blessings xxoo

Greg Gaul
Date: 5/23/2021 11:55:00 AM

Connie, you can kiss one rose and the universe kisses you back. You are so awake and we are so fortunate to have your comments. Few on these sites are awake, most are sadly stuck in 15th century religiosity, certainty. Doesn't make them bad people, they just can't hear my blunt poetry. Talking to you is like speaking to an indigenous spiritualist, Zen guru and inspired poet all at once. Always uplifting.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/15/2021 6:57:00 PM

Very enriching thoughts, Greg. I enjoyed reading and thinking about your poem.

Greg Gaul
Date: 5/15/2021 7:24:00 PM

Thanks so much for your visit and interest. Afterlife and consciousness are key topics for me and I suppose, because of your background, for you too. Much appreciated comments.