Greg Gaul Poet Sonnet

Falling All Apart

Bits of every consciousness does live on
Transported through cosmic thought energy
When the whole of self is nearly now gone
Deep down inside where nobody shall see

Some could call spirits back upon command
When one wants to hold on to endeavor
Just for those inspired instants once so grand
This way, we should surely live forever

Karmic kindness in glowing auras shines
Glimpses of all can come alive again
Like little film clips chiming in our minds
Melded interminably well within

If there is one soul still here on this earth
Many can live on, for what it is worth

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Connie Marcum Wong May 23, 2021 at 3:48 AM This is so true Greg. I understand auras. After I quit flying I became an Aura Photographer. It is amazing what shows up in the photographs. I love the meaning in your third stanza. I am Faving this gem. Blessings xxoo Greg Gaul May 23, 2021 at 11:55 AM Connie, you can kiss one rose and the universe kisses you back. You are so awake and we are so fortunate to have your comments. Few on these sites are awake, most are sadly stuck in 15th century religiosity, certainty. Doesn't make them bad people, they just can't hear my blunt poetry. Talking to you is like speaking to an indigenous spiritualist, Zen guru and inspired poet all at once. Always uplifting.

L Milton Hankins May 15, 2021 at 6:57 PM Very enriching thoughts, Greg. I enjoyed reading and thinking about your poem. Greg Gaul May 15, 2021 at 7:24 PM Thanks so much for your visit and interest. Afterlife and consciousness are key topics for me and I suppose, because of your background, for you too. Much appreciated comments.