Falling

*It's intended to be structured like song lyrics just BTW*




I'm falling, so slowly
I'm begging, please hurry
Take me in don't shut me out

I'm praying, so weary
So tell me, where are we?
Light the way and lead me home

Tear me apart and take my life
Stab me in the dark so know I see
I'm so alone as you twist your knife
I wish these feelings would let me be

SAVE ME

I'm telling, so be it
I'm screaming, please hear me
Erase the tortured broken past

Now I'm falling, so slowly
I'm begging, please hurry
It's never meant to last

SAVE ME
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Boddie Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 11:22 AM
if I try to save you....what roads will we pave through....because my heart can take no more....and there is only 1 other lady I wish to adore.....;)
Biles Avatar
October 5, 2015 at 11:14 AM
Do you dare?... ;) -TJ
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