Falling

Your letting me go,
You no longer want me,  
I'm falling back to the ground from the sky's that held me,  
I'm falling hard, 
falling fast, 
I'm falling back from the pass, 
You have discarded me, 
all of our memories, 
all the little pieces of me.
you no longer want me,
you want a newer version,
the least broken version,
the more happier version,
but hunny you drove me here,
all those nights you screamed, 
the anger you rained down on me,
there was no mercy for me to plead,
has I beg from me knees,
I beg for you to set me free,
lower that knife,
take my life,
set me free,
send me back to the angels,
that held me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/15/2015 9:51:00 AM
Davina :) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. Hope you had a wonderful Valentines day. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 2/13/2015 2:28:00 AM
This poem is so beautiful!I love the way it flows. It expresses a lot of emotions. Thank you you for sharing, Davina. Have a great day! :)
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Davina Browne
Date: 2/14/2015 7:03:00 AM
thank you mel, yes lots of emotions in this piece and in many of my others too, so glad you liked it, bless it be dee
Date: 1/28/2015 8:48:00 PM
truly very beautifully crafted piece davina
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Davina Browne
Date: 2/14/2015 7:02:00 AM
thnk you liam I hope to get around to everyone's poem's if my son gives me time :) lol thank you for commenting bless it be dee
Date: 1/26/2015 12:58:00 PM
- A warm welcome to the P Soup, Davina :) - Hope it will come many more poems from you in the future - Enjoy reading your first, a very well written poem - // Anne-Lise :)
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Davina Browne
Date: 2/14/2015 7:01:00 AM
thank you Anne lise, I will try my best :) bless it be dee
Date: 1/25/2015 4:44:00 AM
It truly helps to write when we are in pain. The fact that you put it down on paper and are sharing it, means you have a lot of courage and are willing to heal..I am enjoying reading your words tonight.. I know exactly how this feels..Always. Laura
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Davina Browne
Date: 1/25/2015 5:43:00 AM
my pleasure, I love to hear feedback on my poems, and to meet people who have been where I have, dee xxx bless it be
Date: 1/25/2015 1:00:00 AM
Hi Davina, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Davina Browne
Date: 1/25/2015 5:45:00 AM
im thinking of something special to enter the contest :) thank you linda, dee xxx bless it be
Date: 1/24/2015 6:14:00 AM
Davina, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Davina Browne
Date: 1/24/2015 6:25:00 AM
hi skat, thank you for the welcome, and hugs to you, that would be great to get to know my fellow poets here in soup, Dee xxx
Date: 1/22/2015 1:54:00 PM
Hey Davina, a very deeply expressed write. If you find a free moment, please check out my poem "How Do You Say Goodbye". Sometimes it's the right thing to do. Cheer you heart; you have so much talent and I look forward to more from you. Neva
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Davina Browne
Date: 1/24/2015 6:27:00 AM
hi neva I did and it was a great read hun, but being in the pain I am I can not say goodbye just for that fax im scared I will lose the memories of her :) bless it be
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