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Falling

The dawn of true love My heart feels comfort and peace Falling leaves of red and gold

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Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 10/26/2014 6:08:00 PM

A most beautiful haiku, very picturesque. Congratulations for being feature. I am also featured this week "echo in the Wind" Take a look and rate please!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/8/2014 12:47:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Willow- I choose your first very well written Haiku - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 10/8/2014 6:08:00 AM

A nice Haiku.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/7/2014 4:47:00 PM

Willow, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 10/7/2014 11:00:00 AM

Willow, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Jasonpoet Boyd

Date: 10/7/2014 8:58:00 AM

In the Autumn of our lives we are blessed with the colors of the past and a hope of a better future brought by experience. Comfort and peace to you always. Very enjoyable and understandable haiku thank you.

Willow Lawrence
Date: 10/7/2014 9:00:00 AM

Thank you Bobb I am so glad you got the reference to the Autumn of our lives :)

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 10/7/2014 8:26:00 AM

My heart too feels comfort of reading the creation.Nice.

Willow Lawrence
Date: 10/7/2014 8:55:00 AM

Thank you so much....I have wanted to do haiku for so long, I am thrilled that you liked it.