Falling

I thought I did not love him,
I had buried it deep inside,
It boils to the surface,
with no'where left to hide.
I have tried to ignore it,
Tried so hard to leave,
Yet I am drawn to him,
Caught in the web we weave,
The gentle touch of his hand,
That feeling so divine,
I am falling, I cannot stop,
His heart has melted mine,
The veil now has lifted,
His true heart revealed,
And I am safe in his arms,
As my heart is finally healed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 5, 2015 at 10:43 PM
RACHEL, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
Ferguson Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 9:45 AM
very good description of love
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October 10, 2014 at 7:32 AM
Beautiful poem.
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October 9, 2014 at 8:29 AM
A beautiful, romantic poem with a happy ending :) I enjoyed reading! Ana
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October 7, 2014 at 4:53 PM
Rachel, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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October 8, 2014 at 12:21 PM
thank you so much, i will post more poems soon and check out the site in detail at the weekend when I have more time, thanks again linda
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October 7, 2014 at 11:07 AM
Rachel, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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October 8, 2014 at 12:26 PM
thank you very much, I will reply in more detail and check out this site thoroughly at the weekend when I have more time, I am touched by the comments I have recieved, I am new to this and I wish I had done it years ago. thank you skat
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October 6, 2014 at 11:43 PM
I really liked this, well done Rachel!
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October 8, 2014 at 12:28 PM
thank you very much jason
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October 4, 2014 at 11:58 PM
Beautiful piece - well done! Welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita
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October 8, 2014 at 12:30 PM
thank you very much pandita
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October 4, 2014 at 1:30 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Rachel- I choose your first lovely written poem - I like it a lot - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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October 8, 2014 at 12:32 PM
thank you very much, I wish I had known about Poetry soup a long time ago I am going to spend all weekend on here I think, reading and reading, thank you x
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