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Falling

Falling,spinning, twisting, out of control. Winds toss me, this way and that. Blue above, red below. Alone, crying, searcing, for a way. The rain falls, cold and hard. The ground aprouches. Death.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/16/2011 9:49:00 PM
Wow. Sounds like you're falling out of an airplane. I wouldn't know, but this about sums it up. Great Job! R.M.
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