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Falling

I feel like I’m falling 
You realize when you’re falling that you are alone
No one around
Just you in the air 
When you’re falling, you’re desperate 
You grab everything around you 
But when this desperate, you grab the wrong thing
It breaks
You have to be patient and look for the right thing to grab, only then will it catch you

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/3/2025 3:00:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.