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Falling

love-locked sparrows falling with Autumn-gold leaves through fluttering branches

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John Lawless

Date: 11/8/2023 2:46:00 PM

That, "whaddayamean" you're heading to Florida" grip. Nicely done Kim,

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2023 2:52:00 PM

Fun comment…whaddayamean…lol

Debjani Mitra

Date: 11/8/2023 10:58:00 AM

Oh so nice.! birds and leaves blending to capture the fall ...flying leaves

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2023 12:22:00 PM

Thank you, Debjani!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/8/2023 9:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely Monoku write. Enjoy your day/win writing away........

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2023 12:22:00 PM

Thank you, Paula!

Regina Elliott

Date: 11/2/2023 3:47:00 AM

Quite beauteous autumnal bird monoku, Kim. If this is for a contest, my very best wishes. xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/2/2023 4:50:00 AM

Thank you, Gina!

Silent One

Date: 10/28/2023 11:23:00 AM

Oh this is a heart breaking one.. such sad imagery my friend..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/28/2023 3:50:00 PM

Thank you <3

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 10/27/2023 2:10:00 AM

Such a pity to se any bird die in winter's cold. Blessings.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2023 5:51:00 AM

They weren’t dying, they were loving! It was cool!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/26/2023 7:10:00 PM

You have 'spared' nothing in your description of love's 'death grip,' Kim. Smiles, Watch D. Birdie

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2023 8:21:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon. Oh my, you are bright-eyed and bushy tailed today ;)

Paige Hind

Date: 10/26/2023 4:17:00 PM

Beautiful!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2023 5:38:00 PM

Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/26/2023 3:06:00 PM

Ahhh, so beautiful

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2023 3:17:00 PM

What I saw today…really cool!