Falling

love-locked sparrows falling with Autumn-gold leaves
                                                              through fluttering branches
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lawless Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 2:46 PM
That, "whaddayamean" you're heading to Florida" grip. Nicely done Kim,
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 2:52 PM
Fun comment…whaddayamean…lol
Mitra Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 10:58 AM
Oh so nice.! birds and leaves blending to capture the fall ...flying leaves
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 12:22 PM
Thank you, Debjani!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 9:14 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely Monoku write. Enjoy your day/win writing away........
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 12:22 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Elliott Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 3:47 AM
Quite beauteous autumnal bird monoku, Kim. If this is for a contest, my very best wishes. xx
Rodrigues Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 4:50 AM
Thank you, Gina!
One Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 11:23 AM
Oh this is a heart breaking one.. such sad imagery my friend..
Rodrigues Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 3:50 PM
Thank you <3
Buhagiar Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 2:10 AM
Such a pity to se any bird die in winter's cold. Blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 5:51 AM
They weren’t dying, they were loving! It was cool!
Wolf Avatar
October 26, 2023 at 7:10 PM
You have 'spared' nothing in your description of love's 'death grip,' Kim. Smiles, Watch D. Birdie
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2023 at 8:21 PM
Thank you, Gershon. Oh my, you are bright-eyed and bushy tailed today ;)
Hind Avatar
October 26, 2023 at 4:17 PM
Beautiful!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2023 at 5:38 PM
Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
October 26, 2023 at 3:06 PM
Ahhh, so beautiful
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2023 at 3:17 PM
What I saw today…really cool!
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