Falling

falling petals
of apple blossoms
rain on my parade



AP: 2nd place 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
April 12, 2019 at 12:49 AM
Line, your haiku compete with themselves today, but they are all in a class of their own.
Gauthier Avatar
April 12, 2019 at 8:10 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.
Allison Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 6:15 PM
the blossom is falling like confetti here Line oh so pretty:-) hugs jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 6:35 PM
Awesome, Jan. Here it is still falling SNOW !!
Mcguire Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 5:31 PM
But so pretty while they last....
Gauthier Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 6:36 PM
Can't wait. I'm a little premature.
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