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Fallen Snow

It isn’t right when snow, once white, Turns dirty brown or grayish For when we glance, we’ll look askance And maybe feel dismayish. It’s very strange. What makes it change? My grandson asked, in wonder. Well, cars and feet out on the street Make all the white go under. Some parts stay clean and quite pristine Just like a new marshmallow, But walk around, if on the ground, You see some snow that’s yellow!

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Date: 2/8/2021 10:08:00 PM
Yes please do not use the pretty yellow snow to make your ice cream!
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Date: 2/6/2021 10:52:00 AM
Yes, even a snowflake ages, and reflects the life it lived. Aloha! Rico
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Date: 2/6/2021 10:40:00 AM
Enjoyed reading and agree with you. Although we don't have snow where I stay in India, but dirty roads do put you off especially the last line you wrote. Have a wonderful weekend ahead. Take care Rama
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Date: 2/5/2021 6:45:00 PM
The whiteness of a snowflake can be realized, but never understood.
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Date: 2/5/2021 4:32:00 PM
ha ha ha your final stanza sure made me smile:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/5/2021 12:03:00 PM
Lol, someone taking their pooch for walkies. Hate it when it turns black and brown, we're still waiting for snow, strange thing though spring flowers are starting to come up. Tom
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Date: 2/5/2021 12:02:00 PM
... :))) ... I have three dogs ... and I have a lot of yellow snow, Ilene :))) ... yellow is cool like sunshine :))) ... the one who asks gets an answer :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/5/2021 11:57:00 AM
There's a lot of gray ice and snow around my area. Another great write, Ilene.
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