Fallen Ones

As dawn rose, 
coughing blood blew out, 
and cells decomposed. 
I, the Octa, or the circle of eight characters 
who carried my own memories 
and seven other characters’, 
remained confused 
by life as I tasted its sorrow, 
and time passed by.

While grieving for unfair death, 
I made my way into the cemetery. 
I carried the world’s disgrace.

Feeling that the world was colder
than fear itself in a sense, 
I hoped to show this existence: 
that killing each other is no better 
than just action like a rightful penalty, 
and, being a messenger, 
I should start over.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 30, 2016 at 5:40 PM
CHRISTOPHER, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Always & Forever! LINDA
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August 28, 2015 at 10:48 AM
Very nice writing. check out some of my work. I am glad I stop pass. I hope you will stop by and check out some of my work. I think you would enjoy "Skyy" and "Moon light" just to name a few. I hope to see you there!!!
Leonidas Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 4:45 PM
thanks April. Sure I'll.
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