Fallen From Above (Septet)

Heaven sent,
                    as if you’d fallen
       from clouds that God sits upon
    while the stars stay alit in your hair
           and also glow in your eyes
                your skin is of clouds
                       soft and pure



Septet syllable count is 3,5,7,9,7,5,3, unrhymed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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February 17, 2011 at 6:31 AM
As if you'd fallen from the clouds God sits upon...wow. Beautiful.
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