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Fallen Art

Trees crowded nude
Take bows on colored carpets
Autumn  shown and shed 


(This sat for a while with too many syllables
Haiku is an artful task
Like wine better aged)

Copyright © Donald Meikle | Year Posted 2005

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Poet Destroyer A

May 13, 2011 at 6:08 PM

Donald.. congratulations on your wonderful feature of the week... I sure enjoyed... take care,..p.d

May 12, 2011 at 12:14 AM

Haiku or not?.....I loved it!...I could just see those naked trees with winter around the corner..while all those colorful leaves lay beneath them.....BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN.....SugarbearUSA........:)

Barbara Gorelick

May 9, 2011 at 4:43 PM

You"aged " it just right. congrats on being featured. BG

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 9, 2011 at 10:21 AM

Donald,congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

May 9, 2011 at 5:25 AM

Cngratulations on your poem being featured this week, Donald

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