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Fallen Art

Trees crowded nude Take bows on colored carpets Autumn shown and shed (This sat for a while with too many syllables Haiku is an artful task Like wine better aged)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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Date: 5/13/2011 6:08:00 PM
Donald.. congratulations on your wonderful feature of the week... I sure enjoyed... take care,..p.d
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Date: 5/12/2011 12:14:00 AM
Haiku or not?.....I loved it!...I could just see those naked trees with winter around the corner..while all those colorful leaves lay beneath them.....BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN.....SugarbearUSA........:)
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Date: 5/9/2011 4:43:00 PM
You"aged " it just right. congrats on being featured. BG
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Date: 5/9/2011 10:21:00 AM
Donald,congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/9/2011 5:25:00 AM
Cngratulations on your poem being featured this week, Donald
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