'fallen Angels'

I watch as they descend from the sky
So many of them I can't help wonder why

Once on the ground they dance all around
Still the sight of them to me is so profound

Some voices come in whispers so low
Yet some billow causing them to echo

There is a reason they came down below
They bring a message of things we should know

~Angels descending,bring from above,
Echoes of mercy,whispers of love~

These angels didn't fall at all
Just upon us they made a call


For : "Fallen Angels" contest of Tracie ~*~Indigo Dreamweaver
~Quote of Fanny J. Crosby included in this poem as requested~

Written in the form of Rhyming Couplet
Written: 02/17/2012
4th Place Winner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Gregory Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 2:25 PM
Remind me of the grace grant us as imagination While so profoundly true. I like this piece
Reith Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 7:06 AM
I loved Fallen Angels! I could see them dancing around and felt assured that they are all around us! Wonderful poem. Thanks Carol, I look forward to reading more.
Tan Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 7:58 PM
THUMBS UP!!!!
Abdi Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 3:18 AM
Your poems are perfect!
K. Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 10:20 AM
What a very touching write on angels, Carol! I really liked this one and I see congrats is in order, so congrats to you! :) btw, any luck on the old poems? I hope you were able to get even a few...hugs
Chebukin Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 8:08 PM
Wow. Dats all I can say to this write. Please write some more like this one. Roman.
Carrillo Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 2:16 PM
Carol, this is very beautiful. I like the fith stanza. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Johnson Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 1:48 AM
great poetry here S C Brown, says poor ol johnson, happy now...
Stinson Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 6:02 PM
What a beautiful poem.
Thurman Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 1:39 AM
this is a beautiful poem i really liked it, it put a smile on my face :)
Johnson Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 3:03 PM
very well done S C Brown... good to see you wear the crown...
Brown Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 5:58 AM
Thank you to each and everyone of you for your kind words. Love, Carol
Goller Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 12:18 PM
A lovely story poem,I enjoyed reading it.God bless you.Hugs!Erich
Brewer Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 7:54 AM
Nice!
Beers Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 6:37 AM
Thanks for your message of welcome. I am sure that I will find some hidden jewels on this website, in reading other peoples poetry. I have just read your poem 'Fallen Angels' and I found beauty in simplicity. The sequence of rhyming couplets just flowed and I thought the concept that they came to share something special with us very touching. Poetry is a very emotive way of expression, and you have captured this. Kind regards, Michele
Kapoor Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 5:11 AM
Great write and great win. What a musical image you have painted in this beautiful sketch. Great write Carol. I have joined an art gallery too “World Art Foundation". Here you can see some of my Photo Poems but I will continue to write on PS as well. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra...Carol B.
Gangabissoon Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 11:53 PM
Congrats on your win Carol!!........Love....Anoucheka
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 6:50 PM
Carol, it's nice seeing you here on the winners' list. Congratulations on your win. I just could not think how to approach this particular contest but you just took the ball and ran with it!!! Luv, Andrea
Guzzi Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 6:03 PM
Nice win here Carol! Keep up the good work. Congrad's Light & Love
Bunton Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 3:01 PM
congratulations!
Pemberton Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 2:38 PM
Hope all is going well for you! Haven't heard from you in a while! Take care!!!
Poet Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 11:35 AM
Congratulations Carol on your win.Loved it first time around.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 11:18 AM
Congrats, Carol! Your poem one of my faves. Blessings, Rhonda
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 10:53 AM
Carol, beautiful set of couplets. Well written and heartfelt. Congrats on winning 4th place in Tracie's contest.....................S.Ronthorpe
Minardi Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 8:02 AM
Very beautiful, Carol. Congrats on the win :)
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