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'fallen Angels'

I watch as they descend from the sky So many of them I can't help wonder why Once on the ground they dance all around Still the sight of them to me is so profound Some voices come in whispers so low Yet some billow causing them to echo There is a reason they came down below They bring a message of things we should know ~Angels descending,bring from above, Echoes of mercy,whispers of love~ These angels didn't fall at all Just upon us they made a call For : "Fallen Angels" contest of Tracie ~*~Indigo Dreamweaver ~Quote of Fanny J. Crosby included in this poem as requested~ Written in the form of Rhyming Couplet Written: 02/17/2012 4th Place Winner

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Weston Gregory

Date: 4/6/2016 2:25:00 PM

Remind me of the grace grant us as imagination While so profoundly true. I like this piece

Donald Reith

Date: 7/8/2012 7:06:00 AM

I loved Fallen Angels! I could see them dancing around and felt assured that they are all around us! Wonderful poem. Thanks Carol, I look forward to reading more.

Melanie Tan

Date: 6/19/2012 7:58:00 PM

THUMBS UP!!!!

Ahmed Abdi

Date: 3/27/2012 3:18:00 AM

Your poems are perfect!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/1/2012 10:20:00 AM

What a very touching write on angels, Carol! I really liked this one and I see congrats is in order, so congrats to you! :) btw, any luck on the old poems? I hope you were able to get even a few...hugs

Roman Chebukin

Date: 2/24/2012 8:08:00 PM

Wow. Dats all I can say to this write. Please write some more like this one. Roman.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 2/23/2012 2:16:00 PM

Carol, this is very beautiful. I like the fith stanza. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Don Johnson

Date: 2/23/2012 1:48:00 AM

great poetry here S C Brown, says poor ol johnson, happy now...

Danny Stinson

Date: 2/22/2012 6:02:00 PM

What a beautiful poem.

Tenysha Thurman

Date: 2/22/2012 1:39:00 AM

this is a beautiful poem i really liked it, it put a smile on my face :)

Don Johnson

Date: 2/21/2012 3:03:00 PM

very well done S C Brown... good to see you wear the crown...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/21/2012 5:58:00 AM

Thank you to each and everyone of you for your kind words. Love, Carol

Erich Goller

Date: 2/20/2012 12:18:00 PM

A lovely story poem,I enjoyed reading it.God bless you.Hugs!Erich

Jim Brewer

Date: 2/20/2012 7:54:00 AM

Nice!

Michele Beers

Date: 2/20/2012 6:37:00 AM

Thanks for your message of welcome. I am sure that I will find some hidden jewels on this website, in reading other peoples poetry. I have just read your poem 'Fallen Angels' and I found beauty in simplicity. The sequence of rhyming couplets just flowed and I thought the concept that they came to share something special with us very touching. Poetry is a very emotive way of expression, and you have captured this. Kind regards, Michele

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 2/20/2012 5:11:00 AM

Great write and great win. What a musical image you have painted in this beautiful sketch. Great write Carol. I have joined an art gallery too “World Art Foundation". Here you can see some of my Photo Poems but I will continue to write on PS as well. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra...Carol B.

Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Date: 2/19/2012 11:53:00 PM

Congrats on your win Carol!!........Love....Anoucheka

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2012 6:50:00 PM

Carol, it's nice seeing you here on the winners' list. Congratulations on your win. I just could not think how to approach this particular contest but you just took the ball and ran with it!!! Luv, Andrea