Fallen Angels

(11/02/2012)


"Angels descending, bring from 
above, 
Echoes of mercy, whispers of 
love "

Fallen angels tracing for a love 
mate
Ask your own heart to open the 
gate

Where in their arms the 
warmest hug can be felt
Upon their faces, their smiles 
brighten up each dim 
Only with sublime motions 
they have troubles dealt
And from their deepest hearts, 
any mistake will be redeemed

So, when angels spread their 
wings, 
Open your hands to embrace 
them in
Tuck them inside your soul to 
cling,
As they’ll ask your chest, for 
them to lean

written for Tracie ~*~ Indigo 
Dreamweaver contest
~Fallen Angels~

Sit on the 2nd place :D

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/29/2012 3:44:00 PM
very nice indeed ;}
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Date: 6/8/2012 7:27:00 PM
So beautiful....please check out my forsaken...poem when you can....i think you will like it...
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Date: 6/2/2012 8:01:00 PM
wonderful write, loved it
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Date: 5/22/2012 7:42:00 AM
I am stopping by your poetry to thank you for your kind comments on my writing. It has been a pleasure to read yours today Dinda. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/30/2012 4:36:00 PM
Another BEAUTIFUL verse. Absolutely loved this. Always, Laura
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Date: 2/21/2012 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Tracie's~ "Fallen Angel" contest Dinda. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2012 6:49:00 PM
WEll done, Dinda, you got a wonderful win with your angel poem. I remember this one!! Congratulations.
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Date: 2/19/2012 3:25:00 PM
Congrats Dinda,I like the tuck them inside your soul to climg part. :o)
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Date: 2/19/2012 2:57:00 PM
congratulations!!
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Date: 2/19/2012 11:31:00 AM
Congrats Dinda on your big win.Loved it first time around.Glad to share the 2nd spot with you.
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Date: 2/19/2012 11:13:00 AM
Congrats on your second place win! I love your poem especially the last two lines. Beautiful! Blessings,Rhonda
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Date: 2/19/2012 10:47:00 AM
Dinda, Excellent work, I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. Congrats on winning 2nd place in Tracie's contest.....................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/19/2012 10:31:00 AM
Gotta love that last stanza the most...it's as tho you are the one providing the comfort in a role-reversing kind of way! Very strong write for this contest. I am super impressed! Congrats. Gwendolen
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Date: 2/19/2012 8:58:00 AM
Dinda congrats on your win, love this one..David
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Date: 2/19/2012 6:56:00 AM
congrats Dinda on a fantastic win for these beautiful words about Angels luv..
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Date: 2/19/2012 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations kash a smashing write xx
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/19/2012 5:58:00 AM
Sorry Dinda this is what happens when you cut and paste for speed, so sorry I wish there was a quicker way to congratulate all the deserving winners than this set up xx
Date: 2/17/2012 8:53:00 AM
NIce to see this one too. Lovely sentiments, sweet Dinda.
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Date: 2/15/2012 9:38:00 AM
filled with hopeful sentiments, dinada.. lovely tale on the theme! winning wishes and huggs! :)
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Date: 2/14/2012 7:21:00 AM
nice images. what would you like me to be?T.S.
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Date: 2/12/2012 10:06:00 AM
lovely composition Dinda on the presence of Angels.. like the opening lines Tracie asked as the introduction to an exquisite write luv.. good luck..
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Date: 2/11/2012 12:24:00 PM
Great work you have done here my Pubished Poet friend....so so proud of you!!! I know I said it before but Im saying it again lol.... luv n hugs Michael
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Dinda Minardi
Date: 2/13/2012 9:51:00 AM
Thanks, Michael! I just can't never say thanks enough for the supports you've been giving me :)
Date: 2/11/2012 11:04:00 AM
The warmth spread within me,from just reading it.I applaud your effort,and send a hug of my own for you alone.Keep up the good work. XOXOXO Cecil
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Date: 2/11/2012 11:01:00 AM
very good poem on the theme of the contest Dinda.Best wishes for the contest.Where is your old Avatar?
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