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Fallen Angel

A lovely woman in the night, forlorn, holds in her hand a rose; pale is her face against the backdrop of a storm just born. Amidst loud thunder, she shows only grace. She wears on her left arm the picture of a heart. Indelible, it’s a tattoo, the emblem of enduring faithful love. Dark wings surround her, for to earth she flew. She is an angel, but a fallen one, forced out of heaven gate, for she could not resist a man! The other angels shun her now because a mortal’s love she sought. Her paradise she’s lost. Has her revolt been worth it? Toward her streaks a lightening bolt! Written Aug. 19, 2017; inspired by Laura Loo's Fallen Angel Contest
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Horn Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 2:42 PM
Reminds me of Paradise Lost by John Milton.
Duncan Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 10:02 PM
Wow, I see you won with this too. I've never entered any contest on PoetrySoup :)
Kimathi Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 8:34 AM
Congrats Andrea, for your well-deserved first placement with this splendid verses! ;-)
Michaels Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 5:34 AM
Powerful write, Andrea. The enjambment works really well!! Congrats on your First Place win! Regards, John.
Ashley Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 2:26 PM
A beautiful and smooth flowing write Andrea! Love your imagery and rhyme. Stunning! Congratulations on your win! :)
Barden Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 3:05 PM
This is beautiful, Andrea - congrats on your win! <3
Roper Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 12:12 PM
Great write describing the picture and her feelings. congratulations on your win..~*
Smith Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 11:09 AM
Another fine win, congratulations Dear Lady...
Canerdy Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 8:28 AM
Absolutely splendid, Andrea! Congrats! Janice
Warrior Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 6:46 AM
Congrats!!! Andrea...1'st place...yahooo!!!
Scars Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 6:28 AM
sweet Andrea, I couldn't have asked for a more beautifully expressed poem for my contest! thank you and congrats :)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 6:44 PM
This is a very well written poem Andrea. Your talent shines. Good luck in the contest.
Read Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 2:54 PM
Andrea, i also like this poem and the description of her and the storm. I was struck by the last line, but I have to think she thought it was worth it. Best to you, Beverly Read
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August 22, 2017 at 12:00 PM
I love this poem, Andrea. Out of the few Fallen Angel poems I've read (and they all were very good) this is the best. That lightning bolt ending is what makes this such a memorable poem. Excellent poetry, dear. Love and joy.
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 5:51 PM
so nice of you to say. I did not know how well this would be liked by folks.
Vaso Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 2:33 AM
My what an ending! I love this kind of poetry!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 7:26 PM
A lovely fantasy Andrea. I am sure luloo with love the romance in this piece! :)
Raven Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 5:59 PM
An excellent write Andrea, Good luck for the contest. You know me Andrea, for love, i would fall. A most interesting take on the subject. Win or lose, love is always worth it. A well written piece as always Andrea. Have to fave this one. Hugs....Mike. XX
One Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 11:19 AM
I would say it is not worth it.. Would you want to be an angle, full of celestial light or be like humans, all they do is seem to fight.. I liked your intelligent take on this contest.. Hope you are well and in good health.. Peace and blessings.
Kannan Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 7:57 AM
Great interpretation Andrea... Beautifully written... It's a winner for me... Thanks for sharing...
Warrior Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 7:53 AM
Excellent write my friend...best of luck...although winners don't need any luck lol...god bless...^WW^
Daniel Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 6:19 AM
Well, that question is yet to be answered, well written, Andrea:)P.s. 'lightning'
Sivey Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 5:15 AM
This is a fascinating write my friend Andrea! You have certainly captivated me by your skillful art of spinning words into grand segments of dream seeming like reality! I surely loved reading this awesome poem this morning! What an amazing and wondrous piece, Great work!!
Mhangwa Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 4:48 AM
Sometimes we must substitute reason with what we feel in our hearts! Nice write and all the best Andrea!
Wood Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 7:18 PM
I really liked this Andrea. Except that lightning part. Good luck in the contest. Dean
Pandit Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 7:00 PM
Well depicted Andrea--you got so much out of that picture--very creative imagination--good luck for the contest!
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