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Fallen Angel

Created by the hammer of God, angels joyfully sing before His throne The Seraphim, angels to be awed in the first order they stand alone I was such a celestial creature, with six wings I have faithfully flown Falling to earth a seismic seizure, now two wings a delinquent drone I fell in love with mortal man, his tender kiss I’ve never really known A fallen angel without a plan, in love's embrace I have been thrown Such a venomous virtue, this nectar of love a calamitous cyclone I have passed my curfew, God have pity on me and not condone Between heaven and hell, love’s sting keeps me grounded like stone I am under his salacious spell, a flustered fallen angel for his very own Condemned for love eternal, such a crime that I have gallantly grown As two lovers burn infernal, forgive us, God, for we both deeply depone. Aug.04.2017 Fallen Angel Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Date: 8/29/2017 3:36:00 PM
Congratulations WW ! :)
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Date: 8/27/2017 6:20:00 AM
Powerful imagery and a great rhythm maintained throughout. Some subtle alliteration, too ("calamitous cyclone"). Congrats on your high-placed win! Regards, John.
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Date: 8/25/2017 3:48:00 PM
Gorgeous write, my friend, I love this ... wonderful rhyme scheme as well - congrats on your win, Bud! :-)
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Date: 8/25/2017 6:38:00 AM
WW, great rhythm, rhyme and imagery, loved this take on the photo, thank you and congrats :)
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Date: 8/6/2017 12:34:00 PM
Well done monorhyme. Good luck in the contest. You present tough competition.
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Date: 8/5/2017 4:23:00 PM
Sarah Brightman and Gregorian Monks, nice choice to go with your well-written poetry
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Date: 8/5/2017 10:12:00 AM
WW, I totally agree with Demetrios, this is completely gorgeous and a fav! Good luck!
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Date: 8/5/2017 7:08:00 AM
Watching the ocean in the video is just mesmerizing :)
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Date: 8/5/2017 7:03:00 AM
Wow, what a very powerful poem, put together here, amplified by the music too. Well done WW ! I really enjoyed this :)
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Date: 8/5/2017 4:45:00 AM
Wow, the power of your words is astounding WW! I really, very much enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this morning! You have delighted me by your honed skillful pen, and you have amazed me by your amazing colorful words! Such a dynamic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/5/2017 2:29:00 AM
A volcanic explosion of language's beauty accompanied by lofty ideas that embraces the soul! Outstanding poem dearest WW I would like to favour it! Good luck my friend!
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Date: 8/5/2017 2:19:00 AM
Oh WOW... WW, what Victor said, I agree! It's beautiful, and the music completes it. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/5/2017 12:13:00 AM
Love is blind, they say, no wonder even an angel 'falls' in love, great take, WW:)
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Date: 8/4/2017 11:48:00 PM
A wonderful write and stories from the scripture are truly wonderful. GL :) Sunita
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