Fallen Angel

When darkness surrounds me and there's no one around

Nothing but silence in the background

I can see the faces of the forgotten and the lost

Sorrow and hate fill my thoughts

All of the world has turned to hell

And All I can think of is how I fell

Dear god please save me from myself

I know I have nothing to fear but fear itself

Yet I still fear the world and all it inhabits 

Will I ever be free from this awful madness

I am waiting for the one who will come and save me

He is my world I say as the darkness takes me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/14/2011 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations Daphne on your wonderful poem winning in the contest. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Daphne Danielle
Date: 7/27/2011 10:39:00 AM
Thank you!!! :D
Date: 6/29/2011 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations Daphne on your win in the "Any First Year Poem on PS" contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol
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Daphne Danielle
Date: 6/29/2011 7:40:00 AM
Thank you! :)
Date: 6/28/2011 3:00:00 PM
Congrats Daphne on your HM in the contest.. wonderful words.. special honor luv..
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Daphne Danielle
Date: 6/28/2011 5:38:00 PM
Thank you very much! :)
Date: 6/28/2011 6:34:00 AM
beautiful devotional expressions on faith, Daphne
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Daphne Danielle
Date: 6/28/2011 5:37:00 PM
Thank you very much!
Date: 6/27/2011 7:25:00 PM
Powerful! A lot of emotion!
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Daphne Danielle
Date: 6/28/2011 5:37:00 PM
Thank you!
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Daphne Danielle
Date: 6/28/2011 5:37:00 PM
Thank you!
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