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Fallen Angel

Seems that the dark side of life Always finds us Doesn't matter if you are a lucky man with everything falling into place Eventually you will pass into Shadowland fallen angels that we are still counting on our luck to see us through We are living on borrowed time Fallen angels that we are We will eventually find peace But it will be a long and difficult road "Fallen Angels"

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Faire Lucas

Date: 8/2/2009 2:21:00 AM

a very nice poem....Love Faire

Habib Effendi

Date: 6/29/2009 9:58:00 AM

I really like the idea of the Man being the Fallen Angel... Excellent thought bro... Thanks too for your comment on my poem DEATH

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 6/23/2009 8:28:00 PM

Fallen Angels that we are...no escaping that one, thank God for forgivness. Wonderful poem. Thanks for your comment on my reeses poem too. ~Trudy~

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/18/2009 1:02:00 PM

It's a lot tougher making good choices when things are right. Seems most turn to God when they are in need only. I for one find my faith stronger when I'm down. I'm hoping I'll see a lot more mercy than justice. God Bless. Vince

Date: 6/14/2009 5:50:00 PM

There is a lot of depth and an interesting perspective in this piece for thr reader to think about. I think most can relate to the idea of finding peace. Thank you for sharing this well-written poem with us and for your kind comments on mine. Keep on writing! Karen

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/14/2009 11:40:00 AM

wow! you hit home with this strong poetic truth! Matthew! well done!! and thanks for kind comments!! Jim

Zach Aurel Henderson

Date: 6/14/2009 9:59:00 AM

I really enjoyed reading this poem... A lot of meaning in your words... great write -AUREL

Derrick Burton

Date: 6/13/2009 9:32:00 PM

While this looks like the shape of a chrismas tree. Great poetry and really enjoyed... have a great day.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/13/2009 8:53:00 PM

recomment on haiku white ashes--therewasnt any incident,but that girl represents myself passing froma bad moment,but in the end the sun shines on the cold ice--thanks again re your comment--charma

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/13/2009 4:09:00 PM

life is full of ups and downs and the road can be difficult but yes i believe with every problem in life we will receive a falling angel--your falling angel==great write my friend---charma

Jay Loveless

Date: 6/11/2009 10:48:00 AM

This is beautiful...inspiring. guess today really is a writing day for me.

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/10/2009 5:37:00 AM

How true Matthew and so beautifully written. Yes, no matter who we are, we eventually do pass through 'Shadowland', some sooner than others. Hope it all makes sense one day. Love this write. Love, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/9/2009 3:40:00 PM

Yes, I do believe we pass through a "Shadowland" in this life -- times when nothing seems to be going right. Very interesting concept of relating man to fallen angels. Nice work, Matthew! And enjoy your trip to Florida. We have twisters here too. Some are spun off by tornados. August is the peak of hurricane season! Love, Carolyn

Brandy Megens

Date: 6/9/2009 3:37:00 PM

you are right life is ajourney that never ends so live your life to the fullest and have no regrets thanks for the coment