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Fallen Angel

Broken wings and bruised flesh Salty tears and shallow breaths Scattered hope beyond the veil Restless winds and stormy gale At dawn faith stood strong Whilst dusk sang tragic songs Of a desperate cry, a Shout for help, as her Eyes look up to heaven While her fate is sealed March 11, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/15/2018 4:49:00 PM
Thanks for all the support - I'm working on my next poem, it'll be out soon
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Date: 4/9/2018 10:24:00 PM
Someone is in trouble. Well done, Carson. A beautiful read. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Date: 3/30/2018 12:55:00 PM
beautiful but such sad lines Carson, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/30/2018 4:52:00 AM
Blessings and sincere congratulations on your fine win, Carson - all the best to you, my friend! :-)
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Date: 3/27/2018 8:54:00 AM
Lovely rhythm, Carson. Congrats on your winning poem.
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Date: 3/21/2018 6:18:00 AM
Beautifully expressed dear Carson. Thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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