Carson Foster Poet Free verse

Fallen Angel

Broken wings and bruised flesh
Salty tears and shallow breaths
Scattered hope beyond the veil
Restless winds and stormy gale
At dawn faith stood strong
Whilst dusk sang tragic songs
Of a desperate cry, a
Shout for help, as her
Eyes look up to heaven
While her fate is sealed

March 11, 2018

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Carson Foster April 15, 2018 at 4:49 PM Thanks for all the support - I'm working on my next poem, it'll be out soon

Line Gauthier April 9, 2018 at 10:24 PM Someone is in trouble. Well done, Carson. A beautiful read. Congrats on your podium finish.

Jan Allison March 30, 2018 at 12:55 PM beautiful but such sad lines Carson, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden March 30, 2018 at 4:52 AM Blessings and sincere congratulations on your fine win, Carson - all the best to you, my friend! :-)

Line Gauthier March 27, 2018 at 8:54 AM Lovely rhythm, Carson. Congrats on your winning poem.

Beautiful Scars March 21, 2018 at 6:18 AM Beautifully expressed dear Carson. Thank you and congrats :)-luloo