Balveen Cheema Poet Free verse

Fallen

FALLEN

Pepped up for her wedding
          Geared and went beyond my resources 
                    Travelled miles on receipt of invite
                                She clung only to special few
                                      Unapolegetically ignored and broken, I regretted going



Verse-30 words
This poem is about a sibling
Balveen Cheema
Contest: Fallen
Sponsor Nette Onclaud

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Paul Callus December 5, 2015 at 2:50 PM An uncomfortable situation expressed in a dignified manner. Time 'camouflages' the hurt of something that, after all, might have been unintentional. ~ Congrats on your top win, Balveen. // paul

Richard Lamoureux December 5, 2015 at 1:19 AM Well articulated! Balveen Cheema December 5, 2015 at 3:11 AM Thank-you, Richard!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 4, 2015 at 9:28 PM Wonderful expressions Balveen... congrats on big win! Balveen Cheema December 5, 2015 at 3:11 AM Thanks Upma!

Skat A December 4, 2015 at 8:07 PM lovely win. SK Balveen Cheema December 5, 2015 at 3:12 AM Thanks SK!

Andrea Dietrich December 4, 2015 at 7:01 PM oooh, SNAP, it's a sibling!!! I really liked this. Congrats on the win. Balveen Cheema December 4, 2015 at 7:04 PM How did this happen? I was writing to Cay Cay! Thanks Andrea! Balveen Cheema December 4, 2015 at 7:03 PM Oh Cay Cay this happened long ago. The competition revived the incident and how I had felt then. She was young then and in youth one is foolish. Till date I've never divulged my feelings. Thanks for your concern! Love, Balveen

CayCay Godwin December 4, 2015 at 6:20 PM Congratulations on your emotional poem scoring so high. Seems this issue may be remedied by time, communications and sisterly love, I pray so ... CayCay

Rob Carmack December 4, 2015 at 6:10 PM Congrats Balveen on your win.

Janice Canerdy December 4, 2015 at 4:41 PM Balveen, congratulations on your win. Janice

Nette Onclaud December 4, 2015 at 4:21 PM i really felt this one, a gem, balveen!..sweet fine congrats and thank you for gracing my contest.. huggs!

Jan Allison December 4, 2015 at 3:56 PM I can understand your hurt Balveen - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Keith Bickerstaffe December 2, 2015 at 7:08 PM Heartbreaking... to have a sibling ignore you after you had prepared so much. Well presented. I'm just sorry about the outcome. Best wishes Keith Balveen Cheema December 2, 2015 at 7:10 PM It happened long back, Keith! The wounds have healed, but the memory came back with the contest! Thanks for the read! Regards, Balveen

Andrea Dietrich December 2, 2015 at 6:27 PM gosh, I would regret going to that thing too!! Balveen Cheema December 2, 2015 at 7:00 PM Glad you agree! Love