Fallen

They say to 
fly is but a 
dream;
I have it and 
with 
passion,in 
time i'll 
scream;
Life,with it's 
mirror of 
deception 
came calling;
Now my clear 
blue sky has 
fallen;
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September 16, 2013 at 9:35 AM
Amanam, i like your fallen poem:-) Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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September 15, 2013 at 7:57 PM
Thank you Poet destroyer A (Linda) its my greatest pleasure to be part of this wonderful community and i know i'll enjoy every moment of it.
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September 15, 2013 at 3:17 PM
Welcome to P-Soup, Amanan ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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September 15, 2013 at 1:47 PM
deep write, Amanan,, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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