Fallen

I hit rock bottom, slowly losing my 
mind
Looking for hope, seems hard to 
find.
Picking up the pieces, posting them 
for the world.
Depression making me sick, started 
endlessly to hurl.


Pushing for a better life, I'm 
beginning to look down,
Saying to all my loved ones, this my 
status now.
Please understand the pain, fighting 
with my all,
I'm Shermaine smith, and I'm 
writing my rise and fall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Robinson Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 8:00 AM
Wow, nice work.
Ballard Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 11:39 AM
Nice read! Thanks for sharing :)
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