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Fallen

i fell
i fell hard
and not for a moment
ever regretted it

you were you
i was me
together we were
inseparable

still you're gone
i'll carry on
till we meet again
my fallen soldier



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

griefhopelost lovefree verse

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

March 21, 2025 at 5:13 AM

Hello LG, a wonderful tribute to love and loss. It beautifully captures the depth of your feelings and the bond you shared. I think the hope of a future reunion is both heart-wrenching and hopeful. Deeply personal piece. Spring Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Line Gauthier

March 21, 2025 at 6:29 AM

Thanks for you much appreciated visit and comment, Daniel ~