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Fallen

A candle flickering in the dark Stillness in the air Even the moon has lost its beauty Head bows down low , a prayer on the lips A teardrop rolls down from the eyes. 16 February 2019

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Date: 3/3/2019 11:44:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win top
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Apurva Prabhudesai
Date: 3/4/2019 12:20:00 AM
Thanks a lot!
Date: 2/24/2019 5:44:00 AM
Hi Apurva, just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed this entry into my contest - really so atmospheric. It only just missed a place in the top ten! Nicely done!
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