Fall the Night

Fall the night upon me dark
Naked born this journey embark
Of friend or foe as yet unknown
Time will tell in deeds be shown

In shadow times when virtue fades
Within a soul love does degrade
All around in greed and pain
A girded heart with taut refrain

Fall the night upon me dark
Tend this weak eternal spark
Battle scarred and scarlet stain
Upon this hallowed ground remain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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March 10, 2016 at 12:21 PM
Stephen, i like the scarlet stain imagery... a 7. LINDA
Mayfield Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 10:41 PM
This flows so nicely, rolls off of my tongue. Keep up the good work! -Lily
Allen Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 6:32 AM
Thank you Lily.
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July 20, 2015 at 12:19 AM
This is definitely going to my faves. I love the structure and rhyme patterns, but even more, I love you word useage in such a classical style. A 7
Allen Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 6:32 AM
Thank you Jaycee for the kind comment.
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