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"fall Starts Slow"

The moon light spills through the barely stripped trees and shines on a wilted flower...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2012 9:51:00 PM

Michael, beautiful... making a wish...pd

James Fraser

Date: 10/2/2010 4:11:00 AM

One can wait in a forested area and capture your words Michael, beautifully written > have a wonderful weekend >> James

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/28/2010 11:27:00 AM

Excellent, Michael how are things with you , good I hope. I just got to my mail, lol, my account was locked. Someone tried to get into my yahoo. I really enjoyed your part on the note. I can't wait to slip my words under the door. I think the poem is going to be fantastic, by the way. Them trees at my house are losing more leaves than we need. They got real boney fast, well now the flowers won't be coverd, hope they enjoy the moon, before the cold hits in. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/26/2010 4:49:00 PM

What an image, Michael. Awesome!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/25/2010 6:54:00 PM

What a glorious portrait in words Michael.. a deeply vibrant Haiku and the words transition into each line so beautifully... luv it.. J.G. forever to my W.K. always...