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Fall Season

Long nights upon us
tree rodents gather nuts shed.
Swollen limbs naked,
the hungry ground has it all
laid out on a soiled platter.

Copyright © 2012  By Caryl S. Muzzey

Copyright © Caryl Muzzey | Year Posted 2012

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October 25, 2012 at 11:27 AM

I knew this one was a winner..Enjoyed reading again..Congrats on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

October 24, 2012 at 3:29 PM

I really loved the imagery of this one and the cute idea at the end. Big congrats on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 24, 2012 at 3:24 PM

Contest results .... you won, congratulations. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

October 24, 2012 at 11:03 AM

Wow!...very descriptive tanka, Caryl...last 2 lines especially...congratulations! - Tim

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 24, 2012 at 6:03 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest Caryl. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 24, 2012 at 3:12 AM

CONGRATS CARYL ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS LOVELY WRITE LUV ..

Poet Destroyer A

October 23, 2012 at 6:51 PM

CARLY, CONGRATULATIONS !!! :-) enjoyed your wonderful poem in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest... take care~xox~PD

Andrea Dietrich

October 22, 2012 at 3:13 PM

very descriptive one, CAryl. I really like this!

Poet Destroyer A

October 21, 2012 at 12:35 PM

Carly, love the image, good luck in Nathan's contest....pd

October 15, 2012 at 1:47 PM

Good luck in the contest. Just lovely. :-)

October 15, 2012 at 6:08 AM

Much luck in the contest... it could be a winner! Big huggeroonies, Jack

October 14, 2012 at 1:19 PM

Interesting work that you have penned for the contest..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Michael J. Falotico

October 7, 2012 at 10:36 AM

Lovely Tanka!! Such talent pours down the page!! Hugs Michael

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