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Fall Returns

How beautiful winters fall returns Natures time to sleep and renew The wind helps the trees disrobe Frosts kiss goodbye flowers Leafless buds bestow Only once more Final act Now rest Sleep

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James Fraser

Date: 12/14/2010 3:42:00 PM

The fall captured so well in your poetry Sharon, lovely Nonet >> James :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/9/2010 10:32:00 AM

Such a wonderful poem that truly gives personified life to the season of winter, Sharon. Well done! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/9/2010 9:17:00 AM

Good one ..Especially like the third line..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..I was encouraged from the comments posted on my work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/9/2010 8:53:00 AM

A beautiful portrait painted with these lovely words Shar.. such a visual delight my friend.. and luv the wind helps the tress disrobe.. imagery intensified .. enjoyed with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/9/2010 4:55:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry today Shar. I enjoyed reading it and I wish you a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Jancarl Campi

Date: 12/8/2010 10:46:00 PM

I like the flow of this poem. I like the third line. It is the best of all nine. I am wondering in line four why not reverse the wording? "Frosts kiss flowers goodbye" The poem does have a quietness about it. The ending three lines are terrific. Have a great holiday and thanks for your comments. "Carpe Diem" Jancarl

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/8/2010 2:19:00 PM

Nice peacful write on seasons...and thank you for all your latest wam comments... luv Michael