Fall Out

an all consuming darkness fill my heart n soul,
the thought of loosing love again is for too much to face.
Anger and frustration flow through my veins like a river of intensity,
the feeling of dread and loneliness hits the pit of my stomach like 
a tornado, 
but do you listen , do you listen NO,
only the worst of man is implicated towards me.
my good heart and my love dismissed like it never exhisted,
like every loving glance meant nothing,
but i remember, i remember every ounce of love was sent with each
and every stare.
i remember your breath flowing into mine as passion consumed our
love making.
my guiding light is dwindling lord like a spec on the horizon,
slowly fading ,
 i run forwards in desperation to try and make you see.
a sadness like no other pursues me like the devil on horseback,
it tries to pull me back from a path i chose with love faith and conviction ,
a path to happyness contentment , with a woman, a soul mate with love and 
goodness in her heart,
My guiding light listen, its me its me ,
my love for you is pure please turn round and save me 
the devlis at my door.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 1/31/2016 7:16:00 PM
GARY, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
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