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Perfect apple orb Spinning around yellow sun Bite made all undone. (January 19, 2011 Wausau, Wisconsin) (c) Copyright 2011 by Christine A Kysely, All Rights Reserved

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Date: 1/21/2011 5:26:00 PM
by the way, this one deserves a 7 rating. It's very well thought out and I have been forgetting to leave 7s on my favorite ones!
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Date: 1/21/2011 5:25:00 PM
ooh, what a picture this creates!! May I suggest something to you? I have very much enjoyed your haiku today and hope to return and finish them. Most poets here use "list of new poems- by poet". They don't normally look at "new poems-all." So they are not seeing all your writing, just the most recent you put up and then they scroll into oblivion. I hope for more people to see your work like I have. If you do one or two a day you will get a lot more views. Anyway, just a suggestion. Luv, Andrea
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