Fall of a Melancholic

Tracing back…
that is what I am doing now,
just tracing back
along this woodland path,
in an attempt to grasp remnants
of a time 
when I felt so alive, yet dying.

Thoughts and memories,
they fall  like these leaves,
a melange of confusion, beauty and frailty

Swept away by the wind, scattered
or swept into a pile, unified.

Either way, they can be stomped on,
brittle leaves crushed into a satisfying crunch.

All around me, 
there’s a profusion of vermilion, gold and copper
but those reds have always been my favorite—
so alive, yet can also mean bleeding.

I see a pumpkin carved out, 
a creepy smile adorning its face
A chuckle escapes from my lips,
remembering that time 
when laughter lived in harmony
with love.

Now, I am not sure anymore…
Because how can something 
that had so much hope, so verdant,
change?

I am a fool, for the answers 
are so obvious—
I only need to look at these leaves.

So much like our lives, these seasons…

Not very long,
I will be staring up at argentine skies.

The thought of it gives me chills—
I pray for spring.



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Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2014 at 11:25 PM
wowowowowow, my dear friend!!! You did splendidly in the contest with this most deserved win. Sure wish you were here all the time like in the old days > I sure miss that. BIG congrats to YOU, sweet Nikko.
A. Sharma Avatar
October 30, 2014 at 10:55 PM
Fabulous write n wonderful win binibining! congrats on huge first place win my friend!
Gasun Avatar
October 30, 2014 at 4:01 AM
Congratulations on your super win and outstanding poem my dear friend, Nikko. Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 9:29 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem. Spring would be nice.
Richards Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 8:53 PM
I can't tell you how honored to share this place with the most lovely poet! As always, your poems are so meaningful, that I often read them over and over, making sure I truly pay attention to every detail. You are truly a poet, Nikko.I've always felt a connection to your words. I tend to gravitate to the melancholy with my own...perhaps that is something we share, and understand about each other.:) This is sad, lonely, and gives me chills .I too pray for spring Congratulations dear friend. :)
Yvonne Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 8:48 PM
Congratulations on your win with this my favorite form. This one could be used as an example of what free verse should look like, excellent.
Squyres Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 8:45 PM
Autumn... one of my two favorite seasons. Love where you took this piece with the comparisons... Congrats on your win !!
Allison Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 7:26 PM
very thought provoking comparing human life to autumn - great write many congrats hugs Jan xx
Puddifoot Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 6:08 PM
"I pray for spring" - you and me both, nikko! a poignant and reflective piece you have here, beautifully penned; you know how much I enjoy your free verse - congrats on your 1st place win in my contest :)
Wesley Avatar
November 26, 2011 at 6:50 PM
You weave the remnants of fall and human emotion together so well and the way you did it is lovely. A sad but beautiful verse Nikko.
A   Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 10:03 AM
if i was a monky could i still eat coconuts
Anish Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 5:43 PM
You point out the tranistory nature of exsistence so well in this ode. Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Dietrich Avatar
October 11, 2011 at 3:51 PM
No, not a Spanish guy, it was the French Canadian!! See me here racing like a wild person to catch up on comments. hahaha
Agtani Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 12:26 AM
Nikko A melancholic poem indeed! A poignant memory so expressed in your poem. I always enjoy your work Nikko! Dalila
Jones Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 8:08 PM
orange is my favorite color. purple used to be. love your voice, my wish for you... is you learn to love it, too. for real ~N
Dietrich Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 11:15 PM
So this is the one that you won with for PD? Wow, i am so glad she loved it so much, Nikko. It is truly worthy of a high place! You do well with thoughtful writing. Luv, Andrea
Song Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 5:15 PM
I wish u would have told me u changed your pen name, Nikko. Oh my word!!!!! I am laughing hard now, I am a total nimkumpooop. Lovely song of a path and yes, I pray for spring too. Now I have some serious catching up to do!!
Horne Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 3:44 PM
Wow, what a thought provoking poem, Nikko - and I loved the way you compared our lives to the leaves. Many congrats on all your wins : )
Mehta Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 12:45 PM
Congratulations onn the win in the contest of P.D., Riko
Sweetheart Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 11:29 AM
Congrats Riko ..Rio.. Nikko ..haha.. on great big win with fantastic poetry my friend..oh u are a sly one u ...luv..
A   Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 11:06 AM
Hi Nikko~~Congratulations on your posted poem of the week. God bless,..p.d.
Brown Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 9:52 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Your Best Poem this Week" contest Nikko. Love, Carol
Wesley Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 6:57 PM
I pray for spring! new beginnings for life as well as the season gives a depth to the poem and searches the reader's mind to ask the question. Lovely verse Nikko, your talent shines my dear Hugs to you
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 6:02 PM
We are indeed one with nature Nikko. A very moving tribute to the divine within us. "when laughter lived in harmony with love." What a beautiful vision this line expresses. Wonderful writing Nikko!
Falotico Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 5:24 PM
Wonderful Poetry my dear Nikko(second eyes never miss a thing lol).... and thank you so much for your kind words in my blog... any sweeter darling and you would be illegal lol... because I'm diabetic lol hugs all day for you... Michael
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