Fall Is Coming

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I never edited this original writing in 2015. it was my first fall without my sister, after her tragic death. maybe another year might bring some better idea of how it should shape up to be. for now I just will LEAVE IT AT THAT 

Fall is coming
With a left list
A behind mine 
Care of
A concern miss
For a hide 
With no find

Fall is rushing
A ready leave
With a pace
At no trace
For a place
At no cleave

Fall is fleeting
For a clear 
With no fear
At not there
In an all dear
With a know here

Fall is faithless
For a chore 
With a more 
At every door
At a no race
For a fall place

The leaves
The rush 
The ready 
A hush in
A mine
With a leave
For a fall 
Of belief
At a call
With no ease

Fall is forgIng
For a best
The near
The clear
The test
With no rest

At a rush
At a fall
With a find
For a fine
Not mine
Fall is coming

For a wrong
At long gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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