Lim'Rik Flats Poet Rhyme

Fall Ing

Carbohydrates, caffeine and chocolate

Crave, create and crash
The season of darkness upon us
Time for a hundred yard dash

To the food mart
Fill up the cart
With stimulants and cheer

Same old story, 
same solution
Just a different year

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Pat Adams October 28, 2017 at 6:29 PM Love it! Very easy to relate. Like Waylon used to sing, "Climbing a ladder that leads to a hole in the ground!" Well written my friend..........80).....Patrick Lim'Rik Flats October 29, 2017 at 6:31 PM And Willie sang, "Digging a hole to get to the top?" just kidding thanks for stopping by amigo!

Patricia Cresswell October 28, 2017 at 2:28 PM Oh so you have to wait until the dark times so that is why I put on some pounds. Well just have to put up with dark times with other outlets wooohooo. Lim'Rik Flats October 29, 2017 at 6:27 PM Season is open year 'round, especially in the frozen north:-)

John Gondolf October 28, 2017 at 9:59 AM Guilty, as charged...hahaha Lim'Rik Flats October 29, 2017 at 6:27 PM yeah, but it's choc'lit!

Jan Allison October 27, 2017 at 2:40 PM will folk never learn John!! :-) I've still got chox from LAST christmas and a huge box of shortbread and a Christmas cake - hubbies diabetes has made us change our diet somewhat and son not being at home means they don't get opened!! :-) :-(:-( hugs Jan xx Lim'Rik Flats October 28, 2017 at 8:22 AM Seems like I write something about the season of darkness every year, but I'm way more cheerful about it than I used to be — plus, I eat way less choc'lit. Spose there's a connection? :-) Cheerios and froot loops! (plus hugs, of course) ~ j

Tim Smith October 27, 2017 at 10:18 AM Put on an extra layer...pay off the payer...go back home and crash Lim'Rik Flats October 28, 2017 at 8:15 AM :-) Can I skip the pay'r part?

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 27, 2017 at 9:29 AM Ah, smart pen :) enjoyed! xomo Lim'Rik Flats October 28, 2017 at 8:15 AM Pen says you get a a nummers Bernard Callebaut choc'lit for being so nice;-)