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Fall In Quietness

Fall, fenced lane, warm sun, 
leaves rain except for one. 

Gnarly tree stretch out limb 
reaching free, soften dim.  

Somber swing hangs alone, 
wish children bring, grace shown.


8/30/2021

In Essence 2 Poetry Contest
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Sponsored by: Joseph May
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Canerdy Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 11:09 AM
This is lovely, Eve. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Seeker Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 8:00 PM
Great write, Eve! Congrats on your win!
May Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 3:32 PM
Congrats on your win Eve, Very Nicely done
Goldsmith Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 9:10 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. I wish I could walk your peaceful path. I love fall and it will be here soon. Have a blessed day/weekend..................
Fenn Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 9:27 PM
Hi Eve! I like the dreamy, nostalgic tone to this poem! Lovely picture too. Hope this wins!
Poet Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 7:59 PM
Eve, you are stunning. You captured the spirit of this picture. Unquestionably a win.
Kannan Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 3:44 AM
So beautiful, eve... You brought out the essence of this image... Definitely a winner...
Cunningham Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 2:55 AM
A very tranquil scene you paint with your words Eve. Good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 1:01 AM
Deftly done, Eve. No an easy contest. Best for a win.
Horsman Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 11:44 PM
Wow words so visual, love this Eve.
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