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Fall, fenced lane, warm sun, leaves rain except for one. Gnarly tree stretch out limb reaching free, soften dim. Somber swing hangs alone, wish children bring, grace shown. 8/30/2021 In Essence 2 Poetry Contest Photo 2 Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 8/30/2021 11:09:00 AM
This is lovely, Eve. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 8/28/2021 8:00:00 PM
Great write, Eve! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/28/2021 3:32:00 PM
Congrats on your win Eve, Very Nicely done
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Date: 8/28/2021 9:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. I wish I could walk your peaceful path. I love fall and it will be here soon. Have a blessed day/weekend..................
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Date: 8/23/2021 9:27:00 PM
Hi Eve! I like the dreamy, nostalgic tone to this poem! Lovely picture too. Hope this wins!
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Date: 8/20/2021 7:59:00 PM
Eve, you are stunning. You captured the spirit of this picture. Unquestionably a win.
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Date: 8/20/2021 3:44:00 AM
So beautiful, eve... You brought out the essence of this image... Definitely a winner...
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Date: 8/20/2021 2:55:00 AM
A very tranquil scene you paint with your words Eve. Good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Date: 8/20/2021 1:01:00 AM
Deftly done, Eve. No an easy contest. Best for a win.
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Date: 8/19/2021 11:44:00 PM
Wow words so visual, love this Eve.
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