Fall foliage

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autumn colours fill my eyes
leaves' transient beauty before their inevitable demise
goodbye ~ no regret or drama



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/6/2025 5:42:00 PM

tis a lovely time of year, one you've beautifully captured.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/7/2025 8:10:00 AM

Thank you very much, Sara ~ much appreciated