Fall Foliage

Fringed by colored trees,
The passage up the mountain;
Calico Autumn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Martin Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 10:21 PM
Calico Autumn, unique and clever.
Bird Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 10:19 PM
A beautiful haiku
Davis Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 1:57 PM
The opening line is nice, great work...Raul
Lopez Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 1:51 PM
You described the lovley scenery of fall.
Richards Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 7:06 AM
I have never seen calico used to describe Autumn before....and yet it is the perfect word! Great work, Raul!! Love, Carrie
Gorelick Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 6:54 AM
Raul, This is wonderul. I love this form..You have such a creative mind. BG
Chircop Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 6:44 AM
i love this one,i love it all,nature at its best-charma
Winter Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 5:38 AM
Oh that last line is brilliant! Feel like driving up that mountain road right now. Awesome visual of my favorite season. Love, Shar
Ginn Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 4:46 AM
I loved the phrase 'calico autumn' it's a perfect description. You have a wonderfully, creative mind Raul.
P. Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 2:20 AM
brilliant haiku, Raul! 'fringed' ... thats new and cool! ~ Arany
Strand Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 1:12 AM
Love that last line Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Gorelick Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 7:07 PM
What a lovely haiku...Im loving this.. Calico Autumn...wow. BG
Mckenzie Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 6:08 PM
Wonderful imagery! Great Haiku Laura :)
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