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Fall Foliage

Fringed by colored trees, The passage up the mountain; Calico Autumn.

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Date: 4/27/2009 10:21:00 PM

Calico Autumn, unique and clever.

Date: 4/19/2009 10:19:00 PM

A beautiful haiku

Date: 4/19/2009 1:57:00 PM

The opening line is nice, great work...Raul

Date: 4/19/2009 1:51:00 PM

You described the lovley scenery of fall.

Date: 4/19/2009 7:06:00 AM

I have never seen calico used to describe Autumn before....and yet it is the perfect word! Great work, Raul!! Love, Carrie

Date: 4/19/2009 6:54:00 AM

Raul, This is wonderul. I love this form..You have such a creative mind. BG

Date: 4/19/2009 6:44:00 AM

i love this one,i love it all,nature at its best-charma

Date: 4/19/2009 5:38:00 AM

Oh that last line is brilliant! Feel like driving up that mountain road right now. Awesome visual of my favorite season. Love, Shar

Date: 4/19/2009 4:46:00 AM

I loved the phrase 'calico autumn' it's a perfect description. You have a wonderfully, creative mind Raul.

Date: 4/19/2009 2:20:00 AM

brilliant haiku, Raul! 'fringed' ... thats new and cool! ~ Arany

Date: 4/19/2009 1:12:00 AM

Love that last line Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Date: 4/18/2009 7:07:00 PM

What a lovely haiku...Im loving this.. Calico Autumn...wow. BG

Date: 4/18/2009 6:08:00 PM

Wonderful imagery! Great Haiku Laura :)