Autumn Rose Wood Poet Name

Fall Flowering Forest

Are you sure you wish to shed your colors
Ultimately leaving yourself shivering in the crisp cold air, a bare
Tree waiting
Under a snowfilled sky
Maybe you should continue to hide your light
Never revealing God's gifts to the world

Righteous blooming 
Of beauty
So proud of the Glory the Lord bestowed
Eternally

Without
One word of hard reprimand
Or warning, solid to out last the test of life and the
Demands of love

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Sara Lokken October 19, 2008 at 7:10 PM Very beautiful, rings of depth and truth....sounds a bit like a viewpoint I had as well...of the trees. Love, Sara:)

Nigel Fawcett October 16, 2008 at 2:18 PM Simply stunning and vibrant verse. Full of the colour of autumn yet reminding us of the blooms of spring and summer past and the snow of winter to come. Nigel

Michael Torres October 14, 2008 at 12:14 PM This is a great creation of yours inspired by God's earthly creations. You put these thoughts in a different realm it is a great piece loved it. God bless you Autumn. Michael

Joseph Spence Sr October 11, 2008 at 4:30 PM This is very inspirational. I like the "Righteous blooming of beauty line." The ending stanza really puts a good finishing touch on the poem. Great job! ~Joseph

Deneen White October 10, 2008 at 4:11 PM I loev the flow of this write and the picture that is paints, take care D-nyce

October 10, 2008 at 12:55 PM Interesting perspective in this poem. Yes, god has given us a lot of gifts--sometimes we're just too blind to recognize them. Thank you for sharing this inspirational piece with us and for your kind comments. Blessings to you. Keep on writing. Karen

Kristin Reynolds October 9, 2008 at 3:39 AM Excellent autumnal poem filled with love and light, well done. Love Kristin

Laura Mckenzie October 8, 2008 at 10:37 AM Wonderful poem of autumn and its beatuy! Laura :)

Michael Jordan October 8, 2008 at 10:12 AM Autumn this is a very beautiful poem - Just a wonderful poem - I enjoyed it very much - God Bless