Fall Evening

where the rides were-
            weed shadows 
         quiver in moonlight

         ~~28 Dec 2015~~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 11:06 AM
#7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant
Allison Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 5:31 PM
Beautiful haiku David:-) hugs Jan xx
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