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Fall Down Together Love

Ruby all boils down 
to you in every dream hot
one vision cannot shake free 

Visiting center 
nerve glows of everlasting
beauty flowering blossoms
 
Singing jewel gem 
voice of a sweet angel kiss 
eyes faraway mystery 

Rose your soft petals 
touch the deepest chambers 
swept away ocean tides wave
 
Pearl of the deep sea 
crowning queen between two 
shells holding such rare color love
embracing ring one daisy 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/4/2015 6:32:00 PM
Liam Mate!! The Leprechauns have told me that this one's WINNER and is quite enchanting as a Choka. Brilliant Job!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 2/4/2015 11:32:00 AM
- We say that Love knows no boundaries and that Love conquers all .... - Beautiful poem, Liam ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/4/2015 6:36:00 AM
Excellent romantic poem my dear friend, Liam. So much enjoyed the read. Thanks a lot for sharing! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/3/2015 11:02:00 PM
Excellent.Very romantic write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 2/3/2015 12:07:00 PM
So very romantic, Liam. Flowers and precious stones are beautiful and alluring, but are nothing compared to true love! All the best. // paul
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Date: 2/3/2015 7:44:00 AM
Magical images in this gem that speaks so wonderfully of love.
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Date: 2/3/2015 2:12:00 AM
Outstanding imagery and a beautiful poem you have penned Liam!
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liam mcdaid
Date: 2/7/2015 1:01:00 PM
thank you connie for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated dear friend bless you
Date: 2/2/2015 8:43:00 PM
Hi Liam ! Another very beautiful and dazzling love poem penned by you my dearest friend.Just awesome! A gigantic 7 +++ from me! A very romantic and passionate love poem to be held so very close to ones heart. smiling. I enjoy it! Truly mighty golden pen! So sweet and beautiful! To me you're the best! May all your hopes and dreams come true. Always believe in you! God bless you and keep you in His Light and protection always!Have a very lovely evening :) Love n' hugs! xoxox D.^O^ "
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liam mcdaid
Date: 2/7/2015 12:59:00 PM
dorian dear pal thank you for your kindness really beautiful comment deeply appreciated bless you